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Small Fayt Chapter Two by *MrsNox:iconMrsNox:



Game Two- Mini Fayt.

They were passing back through Kirlsa from their journey to Airyglyph to talk to the king and acquire the crimson scourge sword, which was now Albel’s. And as usual, the samurai had wanted to test his new weapon out on his personal training mannequin- Fayt Leingod.

The other members of the group were resting quietly in the kitchen area of one of the abandoned houses- which had been converted to a house the size of Woltar's mansion.

Hearing the wail from the back garden (which was used mainly as Albel's personal training patch) had not raised any heads. After all, many times Fayt was able to fight Albel and cause him to cry out from the painful blows dealt against him along the way, as many times as Albel struck the bluenette.

This time however, moments passed before the samurai broke in through the back door into the kitchen with a certain blue haired warrior under his arm, and when they looked up lethargically, Albel held the boy out and their eyes popped out in shock.

"Is that who I think it is?" Maria asked dubiously, thinking in her rationality that Albel was pulling a prank and had taken one of the local boys to torture and dress up like Fayt. Then again, by the look on the man's face, and his tendency not to show humour in anything but verbally abusing his comrades, she revised this opinion.

"Who the hell else would it be!" Albel shouted angrily, plopping Fayt down in front of the gathering, awed warriors.

Fayt met their glances shyly, he stumped his feet and looked at the floor before starting and darting back round to hide behind Albel, poking his head out from behind the samurai's skirt and only then smiling widely- feeling safe.

"What the hell did you do!" Cliff exclaimed, standing from sitting opposite that very door, facing Albel from behind the white kitchen top where he and Sophia sat eating breakfast.

"I didn't do anything!" Albel protested, red in the face, stepping aside as Fayt tried to hold his garment in comfort, about to kick him away when-

"F-Fayt?" Sophia was leaning down, peering at Fayt like she were trying to look into a narrow hole, her eyebrows far above her wide, glittering eyes.

Sophia was the one who had a blatant crush on older, mature Fayt, and blatant plans to make him her husband and have mini Fayts and Sophias. But with Fayt in his current condition, at an age where he was barely 4ft tall and girl kisses gave cooties, these ambitious plans seemed dead- and the blank, then vexed expression showed on her face.

Albel's eyes rolled, great, now he was going to get yelled at by Sophia too. Sophia's mouth opened, but instead of whipping around to Albel with puffed up cheeks, she let out a startling noise.

"Awwwwwwwww! Fayt- you're adorable!" she cooed, and she reached out before Fayt could find the safety behind Albel again.
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Author's Comments

Kya! Will Sophia get her grubby little hands on Fayt?! Ack... I fear re-reading this story will get me back into Sophia hating mode. Achem! So here's a very short critique of my work:

I'm guilty of long winded sentences in this chapter. ^-^;
I like some of the descriptions and the actions in this- my favourite of which being the mental image of Albel booting a mini Fayt into the air. XD!

Anyway, I hope you enjoy.

Oh, and from now on I will start putting links to previous chapters on the descriptions of my stories as suggested by a DA friend.

By the end of this story there should be 10 links, since there are 10 other chapters besides this one. I hope it makes things easier for you.

Small Fayt Game One: Fayt is Tiny! [link]
Small Fayt Game Two: Mini Fayt. [link]
Small Fayt Game Three: Who are they? [link]
Small Fayt Game Four: Babysitter. [link]
Small Fayt Game Five: Albel cracks! [link]
Small Fayt Game Six: No friends. [link]
Small Fayt Game Seven: Park Rescue! [link]
Small Fayt Game Eight: Friends Love![link]
Small Fayt Game Nine: Offering Muffins![link]
Small Fayt Game Ten: Growing Up! [link]
Small Fayt Game Eleven/End: My Bluenette. [link]

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:iconfalbet:
don't let her touch him!!!! lol. **im so anti-Sophia** poor girl. she's just so annoying. i would probably react the same way, though. i bet Fayt would be adorable as a little kid =3 have you by any chance read "The Sentimental Feelings"? [by Ciisi on fanfiction.net] if you haven't, im sure you'd love it!
:iconwowkrynne:
OMG! A CUTE LIL BABY FAYT!! :O :O :O Sooooo cuuuute... :love:

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:iconbemani247:
nice continuation ^w^ *stops to dream about Sofia*
:iconmrsnox:
Kya! Thanks! This story can be constrewed as very soft AlbelxFayt in later chapters. So watch out my male friend. ^-^ I'm glad you like what I've written so far though. And that you're... dreaming well. :heart:

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Goku: "I have been waiting forever to get out of these dinky pyjamas!"
Vegeta: "So, you feel like taking on a real Saiyan?"

[link] Live Journal Rules. You know it. ~albelxfayt~albel-nox-club~star-ocean-lover
:iconmrsnox:
:giggle: Thanks! He is cute! And thanks for commenting! Hope you enjoy the rest too.

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Goku: "I have been waiting forever to get out of these dinky pyjamas!"
Vegeta: "So, you feel like taking on a real Saiyan?"

[link] Live Journal Rules. You know it. ~albelxfayt~albel-nox-club~star-ocean-lover
:iconmrsnox:
Wow, if you hate Sophia and don't want her to touch Fayt... then this story is going to be a rollercoster for you. ^-^ Yes, he's too adorable as a kid! But too adorable even for Albel to resist? We shall see. No, I haven't read that story I don't think. I shall look it up later on. ^-^

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Goku: "I have been waiting forever to get out of these dinky pyjamas!"
Vegeta: "So, you feel like taking on a real Saiyan?"

[link] Live Journal Rules. You know it. ~albelxfayt~albel-nox-club~star-ocean-lover
:iconchlover:
ahahahaha! Oh man, pooor Fayt! *doubles over in hysterical laughter* Oh. My. God!

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~C~

"See me not for the colours of which I play, but for the stories that they convey... Or see me not at all."

"I see you not for who you are, but for all that I can see."
:iconbemani247:
i cant wait to read more ^w^ hmmm, as long as its mild, I guess I can accept a lil Fayte X Albel content >x< Im still dreamin, yes Sophia thats the thats...umm...excuse me
:iconfalbet:
yaaaaaaaaaay proverbial rollercoasters!! [[im terrified of real rollercoasters, lol. im sucha pansy X3]] *heehee* Albel can't resist. hopefully. =3 aa, you should definitely check it out. ^_^ i'm looking forward to your next chapter!!

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