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Small Fayt Chapter One by *MrsNox:iconMrsNox:



Game One- Fayt is tiny!

Albel and Fayt were training, and as usual Albel was talking very little to the bluenette- in fact- Fayt was thinking about that very fact. Albel was personal, and liked his space and solitude. It was clear that small talk and trainingwere all he seemed to have for the boy.

But no matter what anyone else said, Fayt knew that Albel liked him.

But how on earth could he tackle Albel on such an issue? How could he really tell Albel how he felt? Really, the problem was, he was just as reluctant to share his feelings as Albel, and when Albel was silent, when Albel wanted to be alone, Fayt followed him in this and let him be, and said nothing to him.

“Fool!” Albel’s voice yelled to him, bringing him back to the fast, furious pace at which they were sparring- but Fayt’s thoughts had distracted him.

As expected, the merciless warrior had spotted such a lapse of concentration as an opportunity to strike, whilst the blue headed warrior’s guard was down- but had not expected the boy to remain unguarded- and so as Fayt’s senses awakened too late and the crimson scourge drew close, it was Albel- in his furious assult- who swerved his blade to grind the fight to a halt.

Fayt’s shock was blatant- as was Albel’s embarrassment, the blade of the katana had missed Fayt’s face by a fraction, and spared his life. Albel’s blade recoiled in shame but the proud warrior flushed a furious red; as he went up to the young boy in outrage.

“What the hell do you think you’re doing, maggot!” he thundered, Fayt drawing back timidly, his eyes looking up at Albel, with a hurt expression- Albel had never called him a maggot before. “Bah! If you’re not up for training properly then get lost, hmph, I’d rather train on my own than look after some little kid!” he snapped, his blade touching the floor and his eyes flashing darkly before he turned his back away.

Fayt was left and dismissed, had he just been abandoned? And why, if not, did his heart hurt this much?

Even though he always kept his true feelings away and held them away, he was always in control- he could always repress them.

But this time- rejected, alone- he’d lost his best friend, he’d been left by himself- and he didn’t know what to do. Maybe Albel felt that Fayt wasn’t his best friend- or maybe Albel didn’t like him after all- maybe his friend was only there for training, even though he liked Albel a whole lot, lots and lots.

“Sniffle,” Fayt let out, followed by a small pathetic hiccup. “Sniff…mmph,” his eyes scrunched up as water seeped from them.

“Didn’t you hear me! Get out of here!” Albel barked, obviously too furious to register this emotion.

“Why? What did I do wrong!” Fayt exclaimed. “You’re just being mean for no reason- I wasn’t mean to you- I'm always nice to everybody who’s my friend!” Fayt piped up bravely, looking up at the back of the samurai, who turned slowly, at first irritated.

“What the hell are you babbling on about now-!” Albel began, when his eyes failed to meet Fayt’s form and they moved down, his face froze, pupils shrank in horror and shock.
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Author's Comments

This is the first story I ever just typed up without writing it first.

I submitted all 11 chapters to FF.Net ages ago as I made each chapter, but was reluctant to put it up here for some reason. ^-^

This story is from my need to have Albel control chibi Fayt and was also influenced by a story about how Albel and Fayt BOTH turn tiny.

But I thought, it would be nice also if Albel stayed as an adult. Hey, I am not a pervert, nothing sexual happens!

Well it's all cute and domineering and is about one samurai's path to find the 'aww' within. A tiny bit of angst, but what else was expected from me? Plus, the chapters are shorter than usual.

So I hope you like the first chapter. It takes AGES to submit something so I'll just submit one every week or something.

Small Fayt Game One: Fayt is Tiny! [link]
Small Fayt Game Two: Mini Fayt. [link]
Small Fayt Game Three: Who are they? [link]
Small Fayt Game Four: Babysitter. [link]
Small Fayt Game Five: Albel cracks! [link]
Small Fayt Game Six: No friends. [link]
Small Fayt Game Seven: Park Rescue! [link]
Small Fayt Game Eight: Friends Love![link]
Small Fayt Game Nine: Offering Muffins![link]
Small Fayt Game Ten: Growing Up! [link]
Small Fayt Game Eleven/End: My Bluenette. [link]

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:icondecendedone:
I love the emotion! And it's funny at the end!!! You did a very good job, I only spotted a few typed mistakes. But other than that it was really well done.

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In the Darkness....Lies all hope.


In the Light....Lies all truths.


In the hold of the two...Lies all of life itself.
:iconmrsnox:
I also noticed a few mistakes when I submitted it, as I copied and pasted it from my FF.Net account, but the DA submission isn't like what it was.
It used to be that you could just write text into the deviation box if you were submitting prose and then change it and spell check it after. But now you can't and it takes so long to set up everything else that I wasn't too worried about a few mistakes. Mostly spelling and joint words- missed letters. ^-^
I'm really glad when my readers notice grammar mistakes though- it shows they're reading carefully. ^-^

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Goku: "I have been waiting forever to get out of these dinky pyjamas!"
Vegeta: "So, you feel like taking on a real Saiyan?"

[link] Live Journal Rules. You know it. ~albelxfayt~albel-nox-club
:icondecendedone:
That's true,And I love reading your work.

Hey do you think I could make grammical, and such, correstions?

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In the Darkness....Lies all hope.


In the Light....Lies all truths.


In the hold of the two...Lies all of life itself.
:iconmrsnox:
Um, well no. ^-^ I'll eventually correct my work if it's that important to some of my readers and is affecting their reading. Don't worry, I've been tempted to ask people the same thing. It's easy to correct other people's work but sometimes you just don't see your own mistakes. :faint::heart:

--
Goku: "I have been waiting forever to get out of these dinky pyjamas!"
Vegeta: "So, you feel like taking on a real Saiyan?"

[link] Live Journal Rules. You know it. ~albelxfayt~albel-nox-club
:icondecendedone:
Oh...Okay :cry:

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In the Darkness....Lies all hope.


In the Light....Lies all truths.


In the hold of the two...Lies all of life itself.
:iconmrsnox:
No offence intended, really. It's just that if other people changed it or corrected it then it wouldn't feel like my work anymore. ^^;
And I can do it- it's just that I am laaazy. :sleep: ^-^

--
Goku: "I have been waiting forever to get out of these dinky pyjamas!"
Vegeta: "So, you feel like taking on a real Saiyan?"

[link] Live Journal Rules. You know it. ~albelxfayt~albel-nox-club
:icondecendedone:
I understand

--
In the Darkness....Lies all hope.


In the Light....Lies all truths.


In the hold of the two...Lies all of life itself.
:iconflare-haynekie:
ahhh!!! o_o no... it couldn't be... is it? (ps, i'll read this later *busy*)

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I like to change signatures.

I am Arumat at Star Ocean Art.
:iconmrsnox:
It couldn't be what??? Hehe, you don't need to comment right away, just comment when you've ad time to read it- no matter how long it takes. But yes, if you're thinking what I'm thinking. He has. :mwahaha:

--
Goku: "I have been waiting forever to get out of these dinky pyjamas!"
Vegeta: "So, you feel like taking on a real Saiyan?"

[link] Live Journal Rules. You know it. ~albelxfayt~albel-nox-club

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